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[harahel]

Small things first:
Fleur? Did not need to have a stupid fucking accent. We know she's French, ok?
Lupin/Tonk? WTF? where was the set up? Do they even speak to each other previous to that?
Where were Neville and Luna for half the book?
Where was anybody, but the Trio in this book come to think of it?
Why is Ginny suddenly a Mary Sue?

Larger Issues
You don't recognize the handwriting of the man who marks your papers for six years and in some cases probably had it sitting right next to the book?
Why why why why is Dumbledore the only one who knows Snape isn't an evil prick?
I mean, come on, he had to know that might come in handy if someone else knew. Yes, yes, dangerous times etc. But he's now made the situation impossible.

R.A.B. Some already speculating it's Regulus Black. I have my doubts, but since I
play him in game, it'd be an intersting twist.

Good things:
Harry was bearable.
Draco was intersting and showed signs of redeemabilty.
The potions teacher getting drunk with Hagrid was a nice touch.
Riddle's backstory proved to be not completly awful.


So much of my stories cannon is shot to complete shit of course. But so it goes.